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Dona Esmeralda

Another Day of Life

Dona Esmeralda, the wife of diamond merchant Don Silva, spends her final days gravely ill in a Luanda hotel as war empties the city of its doctors and closes its hospitals. Her brief encounter with the narrator, followed by her burial in a stark white cemetery above the sea, gives intimate human form to the abandonment surrounding the besieged city.

Identity and Condition

Dona Esmeralda lives in the room next to the narrator’s at the Tivoli Hotel with her husband, Don Silva. She is dying of cancer, but the institutions that might ordinarily care for her have disappeared: the hospitals are closed and the doctors have left. The account does not describe a course of treatment or a circle of caregivers. Instead, her last days are marked by pain and isolation.

Her body is described as twisted with pain and seeming to disappear among a heap of pillows. The image makes her illness physically present without turning it into an abstract symbol: she is a person enduring a specific, worsening condition in a city where basic help is unavailable.

Encounter with the Narrator

The narrator is afraid to enter her room. On one occasion, however, he goes in to ask whether his nighttime typing bothers her. For a moment, her thoughts break free of the pain, and she answers: "No, Ricardo, I haven’t got enough time left to be bothered by anything." Her reply is brief and lucid, directed not toward the war outside but toward the small disturbance of another person’s work.

The exchange sets the ordinary scale of the question against the finality of her condition. The narrator asks about noise; Dona Esmeralda answers from the knowledge that her remaining time is short. The scene offers no claim that her pain has passed—only a moment in which she can respond to someone nearby.

Coma, Death, and Burial

Later, Dona Cartagina argues with Dom Francisco Amarel Reis about the cost of Dona Esmeralda’s funeral because Dona Esmeralda will not come out of her coma. The practical details of arranging a burial enter the account alongside the larger breakdown of city life: even a funeral has to be organized and its cost contested while normal services and personnel have vanished.

Dona Esmeralda is buried in a cemetery on a steep slope above the sea. The narrator describes it as white as if covered by eternal snow, with needle-like cypresses rising dark blue in the sunlight. Its blue gate, unusually warm and optimistic amid the grave setting, suggests a procession heavenwards like the saints in Louis Armstrong’s song. The burial scene does not undo the bleakness of her unattended illness; it gives her a carefully observed resting place after a death that has taken place amid civic abandonment.

The Hotel and the City’s Departure

Dona Cartagina, whom the narrator calls the hotel’s guardian spirit, takes an active interest in arranging matters and introduces the narrator to the people he writes about. Her concern extends to Dona Esmeralda’s funeral, linking the dying woman’s private circumstances to the improvised network of attention still operating inside the hotel.

The day after the burial, Don Silva leaves. The account places his departure after Dona Esmeralda’s funeral but does not explain his decision or describe her beyond the coma and burial. That sequence leaves the contrast plain without resolving it: the husband who had shared the hotel room goes, while the narrator’s record preserves the woman whose last days were spent without medical help. Her brief answer, the funeral dispute, and the white cemetery remain as concentrated traces of private suffering within Luanda’s broader depopulation.

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